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Usually stories are just good in some parts and a little dull in others BUT this story is good in every chapter and there is never a dull moment.

i am still so pissed off at them! especially mugen. yeah so jin forgave them but i still havent....

Oh hooray! Your muse is kicking A! They came back for him (not that I thought they wouldn't ;-). Thanks for updating so quickly. It would have been very hard to wait a few weeks to know what happened to Jin.

I came in from running around with my friend that cam in from California and there was a new chapter.Yeah!I was so happy so I read it and it si good we are now on the road again and hopefully away from the bad guys. (looks in rear view mirror) RUN! lol

oh... my... god. That is all I can say. You are a genius. But I feel so bad for Jin. But I have a suspicion that he just went into a coma. When I was reading Chapter Thirteen I knew that what he was experiencing was a seizure, so I'm taking these "suspicions" seriously. But those three (Mugen, Yana, and Shigure) are true whores. Dont get mad, but seriously. How can they just fuck each other, knowing that Jin is going to die? Yana knew or what Im assuming he knows, that to get Jin better, he has to see Mugen. So when he walks inside the hotel room, the first thing he should of done was to tell Mugen and Shigure what's happening to Jin. If he truly loved Jin the way he says he does, he will get Jin better and then tell Mugen what he thinks about their relationship. And Mugen shouldn't have fucked... or let Yana fuck him after hearing what Shigure said, you know? I mean I would at least be a little distant with that. But I loved the way you wrote this story. You have to update soon! I mean... it's becoming an addiction... Every day I get online for the sole(dont know if thats spelled right) purpose of seeing if you updated. I cant wait to see what happens next. You should really consider publishing your own orginal book if you're interested in that stuff. You are a very good writer and I am sure you will sell thousands of books. I hope I don't sound like a preening fangirl...

Kinkybob
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Wow, that was in a word... intense. I am loving this story, all the angst and smut and characters. And I must say, I adore Jin but Shigure is my favorite! I think he gets the short ends of all the sticks, even if he is a cute little pothead. Update soon!

i seriously cried when mugen said that to jin, the thing on the phone. mugen is such an ass. i'm so worried about poor jin stuck in that hospital....

I could't ride a damn roller coaster and have my heart in my throat any more. This was a good chapter and it went everywhere. Oh, my poor Jin what is he going to do and I am so mad a Mugen. OMG this is killing me. Up date asap. Love ya!

goddamnit! fuckin cliff hanger... jin needs to get on up outta that hospital. please DONT KILL JIN! i will sue you! under pretenses of... uh... shit... well shoot i cant sue you but dont kill jin. i really dont think you would anyways. also i need more smut. i'm suffering from smut withdrawels.
hope you update soon!
peace&love

Excelent chapter! I cried cause I just knew they were caught but then the doctor was on thier side I go yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Of course I need more as soon as posible. love ya girl and of course I love the guys Yana and Shishhi.