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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've read this fanfiction in one sitting last night and was deeply impressed! You've created a thrilling story and wonderful characters! I love the way you brought together four highly different guys and formed a quartet which has greatly grown to me! Each character is unique, yet they all interact smoothly and complement each other perfectly. I am very fond of laid-back, humorous, loyal, kind-hearted Shishi! He made me smile and laugh a lot!
The only character I can't warm up to is Jin since he is utterly uke, submissive and cries all the time (although I understand that the emotional stress he's under is straining his nerves to a degree that would make everyone break down eventually. The environment he has been raised in - the coldness of his family as well as the disciplined and strong way of the samurai - raised the expectation that he'd have grown very cold outwardly, distrusting others, controlling his feelings and hiding them ). The story is great, nonetheless! It's well and thoroughly written, the dialogues are witty, and the story-line is interesting and creative!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
~Comtess~
The only character I can't warm up to is Jin since he is utterly uke, submissive and cries all the time (although I understand that the emotional stress he's under is straining his nerves to a degree that would make everyone break down eventually. The environment he has been raised in - the coldness of his family as well as the disciplined and strong way of the samurai - raised the expectation that he'd have grown very cold outwardly, distrusting others, controlling his feelings and hiding them ). The story is great, nonetheless! It's well and thoroughly written, the dialogues are witty, and the story-line is interesting and creative!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
~Comtess~
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My very dear Blunt, you are a very great writer and I am a voratious reader. So, This being the case PLEASE Send more as fast as you can. I to am a wirter and try very hard to get more up fast so my readers can read it This would be nice for you to do the same, ne? This story has caught my interest and I am ver ancious to know what happens next. Oh Great Budda make the writer to send more for me to read soon. It will be greatly appersicated.
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Just wanted to say that. I cheer everytime I see an update and it is HOT!!! I love your original idea with these characters. Update soon!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Thank you so so so so much for updating! I neeeeeeeed to know what happens next! If you update again, I'll give you a coooookie! *holds out cookie*
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July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh i find this fic quite interesting and i haven't read a fic w/ the boys that was out of there usual world. Hope u will continue. ^^
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I have read to the end and I NEED more. Please up update ASAP. I love this fic. It is the most adventurious and Hot one I ever read.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is the second time I have read it but it is still great. Ilove it. So sweet. I emailed you hope you got it.
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have alReady read this when it was on the other service. I was going to start withthe last chapter but I loved it so much I have decided to re-read the whole thing. and I really never have like any AU that I have readd but yours. It is super great.
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February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know whaaaatt??? ok ive been reading this alllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
the way through with out reviewing and im sorry and i ow you about nine reviews.
But now... i'm pissed. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!
please and thank you.
:o]
the way through with out reviewing and im sorry and i ow you about nine reviews.
But now... i'm pissed. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!
please and thank you.
:o]
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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still going strong! Nice scene with Yana and I'm glad to see that Kaze's got the fear of god in him now...bwa ha ha. Hope you let him have it good...eventually. Looking forward to the next installment.