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(Does monkey dance to music from The Red Elvises) More from Blunt! More Jin! More Mugen! More angst! Oh frabjous day! (Can no longer contain self - drops to floor and hopes Mugen shows up for CPR practice.)

It\'s not my style to give out negative reviews, but I have to say I *despise* this story. I couldn\'t finish it. The way you are writing Mugen and Jin have absolutely *nothing* to do with how they are portrayed in the series. I skimmed through some of it and find Jin totally nonfunctional, Jin weeping at every turn and then he\'s cutting himself? You admit this is OOC, so why didn\'t you just name the characters Joe and Tom? Why do you need to MarySue Mugen, and especially Jin, in this horrifying way? Girl, you\'ve got some interesting nightmares going on in your head, but I sure wish you\'d take them somewhere else and leave these characters alone. It literally turned my stomach. Thanks for ruining my evening

*weeps* I have been looking for SC yaoi fic where Mugen is tops for a long, long time. *throws self at your feet* Update soon! Pleeeaaase? This story is so beautifuly written, and it even made me cry. That doesn\'t happen often! And then you go and leave me with a cliffhanger?? Not fair. Not fair at all. ;) Please update this soon, I\'ve really got to know how this all turns out.

AUGH! I read it again, and guess what!?
NO NEW CHAPTER!?
DAMN YOU!
Update, or I\'ll stalk your house! >O
..... (And probably praise you.)
GAH!

Oh, this is getting very interesting! Shigure and Jin......Hmm...I think I like where this is going. This story is ubber great and I can\'t wait until you write the next chapter!!
Your stories = love

YOU LEFT IT AT THIS!? HOW COULD YOU!
Urgh, this new chapter made me so pissed. xD
Please, please update soon before IfindoutwhereyouliveandKEELj00.
I love how Jin gets all nervous when he talks different.
I love this fic. More please! <3

another wonderful chapter i cant wait to read the next one, god whats gonna happen?!?!?!?!? must find out!! please get the next chapter done as soon as possible

augh! I want to kill this kaze! Aw! So awful!

You\'re pulling at my heart Full metal!

I really realy do not like Mugen\'s friends! Well, Shigure is ok, more protective of Jin than Mugen is. WTF is Mugen\'s problem, ignoring his love like that?
Bad Mugen, Bad Kaze, Bad Jerk Yana!

Ah, another great chap!! And I think you do the best original OCs that I\'ve ever read. They really add to the fic instead of taking away from it. They blend in really well, and cause so much trouble!! That Kaze dude is already getting on my nerves, and hopefully he won\'t try and force himself on Jin ^_~ Anyway, great job, and can\'t wait for the next chap!!!