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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when the pocky was gonna come out xD Hilarious ending!
Yes! Raiot is lusting for L! They were pretty OOC. It was more the typical seme and uke relationship. Raito is dominating, lustful, horney, and does all the work. L is resisting, cute, writhing, submissive..and -drools- Awesome lemon scene! ^_^ It wasn't rushed and Raito made good use of his chains..maybe more kinky-ness next time? xD
Keep up the great work and keep making stories! ^_^
Yes! Raiot is lusting for L! They were pretty OOC. It was more the typical seme and uke relationship. Raito is dominating, lustful, horney, and does all the work. L is resisting, cute, writhing, submissive..and -drools- Awesome lemon scene! ^_^ It wasn't rushed and Raito made good use of his chains..maybe more kinky-ness next time? xD
Keep up the great work and keep making stories! ^_^
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yours is the first Death Note fanfiction I've read. I usually have really high expectations when exploring the fanwork world, when the series is so good. I have to say, with your fic, I wasn't dissappointed! I loved reading it. The only thing I wish was there that wasn't was a better description of where Raito was sitting in relation to L. It was a little hard to picture the scene at first because of that.
But still, your fic was great. I kept wondering how the Pocky would play a role, and I have to say, I was actually surprised by it, becuase by the end of the fic, I had forgotten that I was even concerned with it. *thumbs up*
But still, your fic was great. I kept wondering how the Pocky would play a role, and I have to say, I was actually surprised by it, becuase by the end of the fic, I had forgotten that I was even concerned with it. *thumbs up*
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHAHA. I love that ending! And shit. That was hot. Love the way you write too. Raito's POV is just way too... for lack of a better word, hot.
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked see Light stick it to L, both literally and figuratively.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I love it. I had to skip the beginning for fear of spoilers after the first paragraph (I'm not that far in the series), but let me just say, "MMMMMMMM." L is so cute and Raito's such a baaastid. It's just like the series! *scampers off to read more Deathnote.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story - REALLY weird ending, though. What the hell's 'pocky'?
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was totally hot and very well written. You should write more Raito/L fic!
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha.. excellent! I loved the \"involvement\" of Pocky!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Yes. HOLY MACKING HELL. The frottage...and the...the...well, the sex, to be simple. BEST EVAR Raito/L fic I\'ve ever read. Seriously. I\'ve been looking for a worthy owner to that name for god knows how long! So, thanks for being awesome and shit. It made me happy in my pants. :D
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it~!!!! you did L and Yagami so good too~! you must write more DN fanfics~!