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for For the Love of Pocky

by kawaiikitsunethief

person whrileeq
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was definately hot... and in character, too... great job... loved the part about L finding underwear as useful as socks ;).
person InnocenceKept
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this. This was absolutely beautiful. Wonderfully in character, good description. You did a great job on L and Raito, they are IMO hard and tricky characters to write about, especially in a yaoi story! But you succeeded well, I luvers it :3 hehe, good old L and his Pocky..
person Lena
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well that explains a lot of blank spots in the manga XD Wish this actually happened...
person Liz
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit... that was hot. O_O

My brain is much like that strawberry pocky on the floor right now.

Very well done.
person Boba-Chan
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was very cute and well written ! I also thought the ending was simply adorable hehe L is sucha cutie X3 and i liked how Yagami was total seme ! :D! It was hot and steamy too A++ for that XD! lol i hope you write more steamy death note fics :)! Oh yea he is also a \"sissy\"(though i didnt think it was like that) cause L= uke and Yagami= seme X3!! If it was different it would be weird XD;! Anyways i thought it was 100% non ooc o_o! Good job ! Please write more steamy RaitoxL fics :D!
person dark_Angel
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hurray the first DeathNote fic!!! iv been waiting for this...^^ It\'s nice how you keep Yamagi in character, but you sort of write L off as a sissy... o well, i say great job anyways =D

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