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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Late night fondlings make the heart say "Oh God, yes..." This probably contains some of the best characterization I've seen in a Death Note fanfic, and is wonderfully easy to see happening.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heeh great!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice little pwp; lot different than what I am usually seeing
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww..that was funny. Wouldn't L start to wonder how the hell Raito is doing that when he's sleeping. Raito's a horney person huh? xD But wait! Raito's excuse was bad cause he told L he knew, but still went a long with it. In truth Raito did want it, and that he wasn't fully alsleep and..O.O...er.
Anways! ^_^; Great job on with the story! Awesome writing and cute ending. Keep making more stories yeah?
Anways! ^_^; Great job on with the story! Awesome writing and cute ending. Keep making more stories yeah?
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, more Death Note smut! And of excellent quality, too! *feels like she's discussing fine wine or something*
You may think the setup is flimsy, but I found it realistic. I always figured that if anything were to happen between them, it would be late at night, in bed, because it just sort of happened.
I liked that you seemed to really get into L's head with the first part. It made the whole story better and more believable.
There wasn't much focus on Raito's point-of-view, but I did like the part where he said "I don't know, shut up." It seemed to capture one of those aspects of his personality that are harder to define. It suited him.
All in all, this was an amazing fic. Thank you for writing it. I can't help but wish that the ending felt a little more resolved, but it's one of those situations where they're going to be like "That didn't just happen, let's pretend that it didn't."
You may think the setup is flimsy, but I found it realistic. I always figured that if anything were to happen between them, it would be late at night, in bed, because it just sort of happened.
I liked that you seemed to really get into L's head with the first part. It made the whole story better and more believable.
There wasn't much focus on Raito's point-of-view, but I did like the part where he said "I don't know, shut up." It seemed to capture one of those aspects of his personality that are harder to define. It suited him.
All in all, this was an amazing fic. Thank you for writing it. I can't help but wish that the ending felt a little more resolved, but it's one of those situations where they're going to be like "That didn't just happen, let's pretend that it didn't."
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dead* please continue this...it's just so yummy.
I adore all the sleepy sensuality of this fic...<33 mmm...steamy xD
I adore all the sleepy sensuality of this fic...<33 mmm...steamy xD
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cute :D
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love those *dreams* ^^. Kyaa~ nice fic! I liked L's contemplation at the beginning XP. Is there only one chapter? Or are you going to continue on it?... Please do ^^ Thanks for writing!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was quite a fun romp
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot... sleepy and hot lol... *wonders what else Raito and L could get up to w/that chain on* ^_________~