rate_review Reviews

Interesting. Love the use of names.

As I`m from Russia, I liked the mention of vodka) And as Mero/Nia is my favourite pairing in Death Note, I think your fanfic is splendid, it has great psychology and sense.

That was good. You inspire me to write DN fics... And I don\'t think you\'re overly graphic with your writing, I rather like it.

I\'ve read all of your fics and while I commend you on tackling Death Note, might I suggest you read up on anal sex? For one thing, it really ought not be done without some sort of lubrication. Not once in any of your stories is lube used. I\'m not male but just reading the sex scenes made my eyes water. There are sites that can help you learn more about the subject, and I think your stories would benefit from a little research. It would make them more believable.

I think a beta would be beneficial as well. There are words used in your stories that don\'t mean what you think they do.

However, having said that, I will say that I particularly liked the Rod/Mero story, and I\'m pleased to find someone writing this pairing.

DUDE! I\'ve read all three of your fictions and I still want to see Mero get taken by Nia! T.T