rate_review Reviews

I had fun reading your work. The changes that you made in the characters' personality is quite refreshing and good to read (It's opens new opportunities on how the characters will react on somethings). Strengthening Shuichi's personality alongside mellowing Eiri's balances the tone of their relationship as well as introduces alot of comic relief from Eiri's side. Even the use of hints instead of detailing their lovelife serves its purpose in making the story very interesting to read. It's good that you didn't involve too many of the gravitation characters in the plot but instead mentions them or inserts them for their side comments on Shuichi-Eiri relationship. I hope you would continue to finish this story because, in its own, its an original series with an already-there characters. Keep up the good work!

helo...your story is really really great and funny too...i hope u'll update soon...i can't wait...plz plz preettty plzzzzzzzzzz continue this story...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Socken-san you\'re my savior!!! i love you and thank you for revieweing my fic!! ur so nice... um... actually how does thisbeta thing works? do i have to sen my fics to you? and you said you can beta my existing fics! how do you do that? well mye-mail is listed above and since i\'m having my upcoming big exam i dunno when i have the chance to log on the net coz i\'m probhited to log on these past few months.

Hey where\'s THomy in this?
I love Yuki--- and Shu,
So update babe
keep it up

Heheheh your story is very funny so far ^-^. And yes you do have a lot of grammatical and spelling errors (and no I am not flaming you). I’m merely suggesting that you find your self a beta reader to edit your chapters. And if you haven’t found one yet I would gladly do it for you! Just E mail me if you would like me to. I could also edit your current existing chapters as well. Let me know \\^o^/ ( I have way to much time on my hands)

~Socken