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I think Motoko shoud be punishd next

motoko should be punishd next

Yo nice story I say do Motoko next give her some nice double pentration for all the shit she has done to Keitaro even do Sarah or Su (God knows I have) But you may not Forcibaly have Sex with Shinobu Maehara without premmision from:Her Parents,Herself,General Bobcat Leader and Founder of Her Kawwiiness Secret Service (HKSS),Raven's Ark Leader Cobray Gordon (Allying Mercs with the HKSS),or you may also get premmission from me DOOM Agent Master Cheif of the HKSS Delta Base. I command Fleet ships that will kill Keitaro and alot of other people if she is harmed in Sexual or Regular ways. General Bobcat ill send the very large HKSS Full Force on you. And Commander Gordon with Rip anyone enjoying he suffering in half. Please write for all the girls EXCEPT Shinobu.*Salutes* Have a good day and update soon.

-Skull J. Darkmaster "I'm either your friend or your worst nightmare you have the choice"

I say motoko gets it next

the only one i say to not let this happen to is shinobu, the only girl in the hotel who is nice to the guy. the rest of them deserve it on some level, especially naru, motoko, and kitsune.

i say Kitsune motoko, or maybe even sarah( i know i am a sick little man but that is why i call my self twisted). But don't rape shinobu. she is the only nice girl in the series.

You had better write another chapter to this. its too god to just stop here!

Great story, good descriptions an so on. And as a footnote, I would like to add that I'm glad Naru got humiliated first. It would be really nice if you could continue this ASAP. Keep Up The Good Work!

go on with the story start up chapter 2

make all them suffer nexted should be su