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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it so i\'d like to see where it goes next and finally some one turns around and has it where keitaro just cant take it anymore i\'ve always wanted to see that.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. But if you rape Shinobu have her resist at 1st but then go into a fit of passionate rage and fuck Keitaro till her heart\'s contint!
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lo, the best dam that was funny
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November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic... but it would be nice if Keitaro was a bit nicer in the next chapter. Some payback is ok but come on she is just a girl... I don\'t think Keitaru could be that mean if naru had cut of his balls and killed his parents.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah continue the story. I despise Naru so it was a nice change. Here\'s an idea in revenge for Naru Motoko attempts to attack him and finds out what it means to be broken in. HAHAHA
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude cant wait for next chapt.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on man!! You have to udate!! This fic rules!!
Have him fuck Motoko because she always tries to hurt him! Have him beat that fucking slut
Have him fuck Motoko because she always tries to hurt him! Have him beat that fucking slut
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do Motoko please. Come on some one admit it. They would have killed her by now. I know I would. Raise that sword. I one draw a gun and order her to drop it. If she didn\'t. Well then I could unload my clip into her. Or at least called the police. She is doing aggravated assault. Then again he the manger. Why he does not kick them out is beyond me. Love it check back daily tell you do the next chapter.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap payback\'s a bitch and so is your mom Naru really deserved that, write more chapters!.... give me your wallet!!...just kidding...mostly
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes. please do continue