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w00t! I feel so loved. My name was mentioned on ze internet! w00t! *glomp*

How the hell can this story ever be a NC 17? It seems more like a G rating, truly I have no idea what you just wrote here. Even if it\'s just a small script, it still has a load full of grammar problems. And scripts are usually a lazy way of writing. The original characters don\'t even seem to be that expressive...are they Mary-Sues? I don\'t blame you for that. That\'s just one of the millions of mistakes first time writers get. Even you aren\'t a rookie or not, either way, can\'t you see this is highly unconvincing? But this would be graded as a GAF (God-Awful Fanfiction). Honestly, what were you writing about?

Happy? We read your friggin\' short story. (note: this is amanda) By the way, *glomp* Roar!
Lindsey: I\'m still blocking you on messenger!!!!!!!!
Amanda: Heheh...I\'m on a sugar rush from waffles. Oh well. Update soon.

w00t! Foamy Inc.