One Piece The New Age Directors Cut

Hello I hope you really enjoy One Piece The New Age Directors Cut, but I really want to point some things out. First the characters Ren, Usuke, and Sandra are toally made up, so if you don\'t understand where the characters came from there\'s your answer. Second there isn\'t much love scenes, but from the original I got several good reviews. That about covers it enjoy ^.^

The crew had just won an intense battle. The night before the new crew member, Usuke came.

Luffy: Man I\'m tired.

Zolo: Yeah but once we go to sleep we\'ll wake up from someone fighting.

Nami: What makes you say that?

Zolo: Let\'s see *starts counting on fingers* it\'s happened about a thousand times.

Ren: True (wait... am I even in this story?)

Author: Whoops *starts erasing Ren*

Ren: NOOOOOOO!

Sandra: That was wierd.

Luffy: Well good night!

Sanji: Oh come on I just made dinner!

Everyone ignored Sanji and went to their rooms.

Luffy: I hope tomorrow will be exciting.

Author: I CAN ONLY DO SO MUCH!

Luffy: Okay, okay, jeez!

That morning the awoke from the sound of cannon fire.

Everybody:WHA!!!!

They looked outside and it seemed like a war was going on.

Zolo: SEE I TOLD YOU!!!

Sandra: Wow you were right for once

Zolo: Hey!

Nami: TURN THE SHIP!

Sanji: The current is too strong.

Sandra: Then let\'s fight back!!

Zolo: ARE YOU KRAZY!?

Sandra: (Soon I might be) grrrr....

Kid: WHY ALWAYS ME!!!!!!!!!!

*SMACK*

Sanji: That looked like it hurt.

Zolo: Who are you?

Kid: Why should I tell you?

*Takes out blade*

Zolo: That\'s why.

Kid: Oh yeah?

*takes out blade also*

Zolo: Do you think you can actually think you can beat me?

Kid: Yeah I do.

Zolo and the kid were fighting for about 5 minutes untilll....

*WHAM*

Zolo:AHHH!

Nami: Zolo are you alright?

Zolo: Yeah, but he\'s good, real good.

Kid: See, I told you.

Luffy: Really though who are you?

Kid: Usuke.

Nami: Hold it! How did you survive getting shot out of that cannon?

Usuke: Oh.... Well.... I ate some of the cursed fruit.

Everybody(except Luffy): WHAT!!!!!!

Luffy: So what\'s your power?

Usuke: Well...

Author: Remember it\'s the Directors Cut!

Usuke: Oh yeah I can do this.

Usuke turned invisible and smacked Zolo upside the head.

Zolo: Ouch!

Usuke: I can disappear.

Luffy: That\'s cool.

Sandra: Heloooooo..... There\'s still a huge battle going on!

Usuke: I\'ll take care of that.

Usuke jumped on the other ship

Ren: How\'d he do that?

Author: STOP HAUNTING ME!!!!

*starts erasing Ren*

Ren: THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELS YOU!!!!!!!!!

Ren: NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Luffy: I\'m going to help him.

*BOOM*

The other ship had just exploded.

Luffy: Is Usuke OK?

Usuke: Yeah

He was standing right behind him.

Luffy: So wanna join our crew?

REMINDER:
This is Directors Cut so it will be much different and have a lot more action.

Usuke: I\'ll think about it. See \'ya Luffy.

Usuke jumped on the other ship that wasn\'t destroyed.

*bang* *slash* *wham*

Crew on the other Ship: THE PAIN!!!

Usuke: Hope to see you again!

Luffy: When we do tell me your answer!

Usuke: Fine Okay.

Then Usuke started sailing away and slowly faded away.

Zolo: (I hope he never runs in to us again)

On Usuke\'s ship...

Usuke: Should I join there crew? This is a pretty hard decision. Oh well I have plenty of time to think about it.

Will Usuke join the crew or will he be a new enemy, and will Luffy be prepared for what\'s coming up? Find out next time on One Piece The New Age!

*theme song starts playing*

Credits:
Storyline
Travis Kerr


Special Thanks:
Lindsey
Amanda
Haley
Creators of One Piece
and Yumishi Tomugura