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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I truly hope that there's more to that~ ^^
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, Very descriptive. quite a few typos though.
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
On chapter 3 and 4:
You sir... are... JESUS HIMSELF!!!
I digress; that was the greatest thing I have ever read! If only there were more fics focusing on Shinji/Kyoko, then I would be happy.
Don\'t forget to check out my FMP fic, and tell me what you think.
*bows*
You sir... are... JESUS HIMSELF!!!
I digress; that was the greatest thing I have ever read! If only there were more fics focusing on Shinji/Kyoko, then I would be happy.
Don\'t forget to check out my FMP fic, and tell me what you think.
*bows*
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better with each new chapter. Nice choice of couples too. Try some of the folks from Fumoffu.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is some great fiction!
You go fully into detail during the sex scenes, and to boot, you still keep the characters\' actual personas in mind!
I was wondering... could you do one involving my favorite FMP couple, Shinji and Kyoko?
You go fully into detail during the sex scenes, and to boot, you still keep the characters\' actual personas in mind!
I was wondering... could you do one involving my favorite FMP couple, Shinji and Kyoko?
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
where\'s chapter 2? :P that was a good fic.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I love FMP and I believe Kaname&Sousuke to be a great couple. I liked the way you wrote this, a little short but still very good, please write more.