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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well written story... Not too hentai it was actually quite sweet with the harsh word added... which is what actually makes lemon a lemon... keep up the good work on you writing!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story/chapter. I pray this is not a oneshot and you cont. this.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love a really good Shinji/Rei story, and this one was awesome. A good plot,characterization,and dialogue. I know this would be the perfect place to stop this one,but I hope to read more chapters, please.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good start so far but I was just wondering how long the story was going to be if they already hooked up. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, a little rough, meaning quite a few minor errors, but overall pretty good. Keep at it.