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for Orenji Neko

by Rissa2878

person cute mimi
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiiiiiiz
i like ur story, but i just want to say that it's missing lemon....i think there should be more hot and passionate love...
lemon, lemon, lemon, please


ur friend
cute mimi
person Paradiseboy
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up and its TOHRU not touru.Happy New Year!
person kiki
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue!!!!!!!!!!!! plz !!! and soon very soon!
I love it :D:D:D:D
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update, this is amazing!!
person meh
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome!!! Please update asap!!!
person vicious-sky
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was really good, and I enjoyed the last few paragraphs. If you are interested in a beta please PLEASE email me. I dont mind helping out on the grammar and spelling issues in this. I have seen half of the series and read all of the manga up to date.
person IrishBeauty787
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this! it's awesome. i'm a big fan of kyo/tohru pairings and you're doin a wonderful job! please keep up the good work and update soon! very soon!
lotsa luv,
I~B~787
person Ally-Chan
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh I like this story! I love Kyo/Tohru pairings!! But Damn you for leaving off on that cliffy!!! I wanna kno what happens!! And as for spelling errors...who cares...you arent writing a novel! Besides I know I cant spell to save my life worth a damn! lol very good chapter...aww Kyou\'s such a sweet, sexy, angsty lil horny beast! please update as soon as u can!
person duckie
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>w
person Jimaine
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOS!!! Ohh i love it! Hehe it\'s so much sweeter than my Kyo Tohru fic lol. Yeah mine, \"The Monsters Dream and The Gods Curse\" is really really depresing and dark and bla bla bla, but they do get together in the end I promise!!! lol anyways sometimes it\'s nice to have somthing just cute and fuzzy like this. BTW I think you got Kyo\'s personalitly dead on! Richious for you! Ohh and as for being rosted about spelling or whatever scew them. It\'s a bloddy fan fic it doesn\'t have to be perfect! As long as ya\'ll get whats going on than that\'s fine so back off people! Yeah i know how that feels, i got this sucky roast about that kinda stuff on one of my fics, yeah made me feel like crap. So don\'t worrie about it i think this is awsome! Anyways... what else. Ohh yeah i like how Kyo like stands up and practicly shoves himself in her face lol. That\'s awsome! Ohh and when she relizes it isn\'t her room anymore i was soo like OHH IT\'S KYO\'S NOW!!! It was soo sweet by the way, the imagry of Kyo curled up in her blankets. I just went AWWWWW!!! hehe it was soo cute! I love you for this! Ohh and when he came in Shirtless, YUMYUM!!! You\'ve got the fanservious down honey! Hehe!!! I think i\'d just be like \"take me now i\'m yours!\" lol OH OH i almost forgot when Kyo is about to kiss her i like melted. It was soo dorbell (aka adorible) Eto...i know there was somthing more i wanted to say...AHH Right! Rukia Renji FOREVER BABY!!! I just wrote a fic for them \"Why didn\'t we work out.\" I think it\'s soo cute hehe. ANd i know what you mean about it grabing you. I watched all the way through to ep 35 (all that was out at the time) In less than a week and i read all the manga (all that was out was like to chapter 190) in a few days hehe. It\'s great i know!!! You should right a bleach one, if you haven\'t already i haven\'t checked your auther page yet...next on my list. I think you\'d really do them justice! Hehehe I love Renji-Kun!!!! Oks so that\'s about all i wanted to say. I can\'t wait for the next chapter here, looking forward to that graphic lemon you promised hehe!

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