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I can't believe how awesome that was!! I had to read it all in one sitting. my dog is mad cause I haven't moved in hours!

I love your voice, it sounded like Yuki was talking out loud the whole time. I always knew he had that kind of frailty in him. It was also hot to see Shuichi as the evil Yuki twin. It's like he grew up the hard way and forgot to be himself - I guess he decided not to trust himself to be that person anymore.

I totally cried during Yuki's break in the park. it was cool that it went full circle. to me anyways, being back at the park and having shuichi be the strong one was a really sweet twist.

And the sex was HOT! totally worth the wait. I like how Eiri got cuffed without his permission. wohoo!! go Shu! raawr!!

I really believe that they could have that final talk and get over the last of their insecurities. both of them. "It's like coming home, only to no home I've ever known." -

Sorry for doing it this way, but there is no other way to contact you...do you go by another name on FF.net?...If so, is it kumagoro18...If not then this person stoled Illusions and posted it on FF.net under her name...I hate plagerisim and thought you might want to know and put a stop to it...catti...

I absolutley adore this story! *hugs*

having gone on a sudden Gravi kick these past weeks I was desperate for some decent fic to soothe my inner fangirl. To find this was exactly what i needed!

The story is harsh and scary and touching. I wont deny that some of the ways Shuichi was behaving were damn upsetting; you just dont expect it of the Shu you imagine in the anime etc. However it all fit perfectly into the world you created and was a bittersweet rollercoaster to watch.

Plus, the way you've grown the little rockstar up is just plain... well... HOT! The long hair had me in a puddle from the start but everything fromt the outfits to the way he's suddenly so much more capable, to of course the brilliantly written smutty scenes were just drool worthy!

And to counter all that you had Eiri who I have never felt so much affection for. It was great to see him still being a cold bastard, but with that edge of control that he obviously picked up.

Siiiigh. It all came together beautifully into one of the best Gravi stories I've read. Thanks so much for sharing, I am moving onto the other stories with much excitement!

hi your story was ....GREAT!!! Im a stay at home mom, so i tend to have alot of free time.....so in other words i read alot of fanfiction, And i will tell you....yours was the best so far....i think i smoked at least 8 cigerettes on the ONE chapter..lol...and i never leave a review either...im not gay but i just love the story of the author and rock star....its like im here at home all day with the kids and i have to live life through storys others write but i really loved yours....i found the second part of this story first but went to find this one since u said it should be read first, im glad i did.....but i was wondering if you wrote for fruits basket too, ill take a look....and ill look for other storys from you as well....keep up the good work...damn i need a cig....lol
bye

You have really captured the essence of Yuki-san very well. Nice job!!! Please continue!!

^_^ this is LOVE~~ i never actually enjoyed smuts in fics... but yours just makes me want more with this funny feeling to my stomach... >_< *hugs n love u lots*

ack! no. dont stop now!! o and FYI Japan so way worse about smoking than america. i saw a commercial that literterly says that one cigerette butt = 1000 pieces of garbage(cause it falls apart in water) and implies that it will like destoy the earth. anywho, keep up the good work!!

This is, without question, the kind of Shuichi I like best of all the gravi fanfics I\'ve read; kick-ass, in control and no whining. I was almost sorry he had to cave in in the end. I wish Murakami made Shuichi this way, it wouldv\'e been a lot mroe fun. This is great stuff. Thanks for writing it. I\'m very excited about your sequel. Keep it up!

Oh my god.........that was the most awesome Gravi FanFic I have read yet!! AWESOME!! If i had the patience i would make this story into a manga! Its that awesome XD....or at least draw the crazy, drugged out, freaky, so much more awesome than the normal, Shuichi! Man.....I know i\'ve said it already like 3 times but it SOOOO AWESOME!!...ok if i write anymore i\'d just be repeating myself so i will leave you with this:......WRITE MORE!!! or i will go insane......Joking ^--^6

Very nice! I really enjoyed what you did with Shu. I think Eiri\'s going to have to keep on his toes now that he has to deal with piercings and a mean right hook! The person I really enjoyed though was Ryu. The Lewis Carroll really did it for me! I\'ve always thought there was more than meets the eye lurking under Ryu somewhere and I was right. Something dark even...\"Beware the Jabberwock, my son! The jaws that bite, the claws that catch...\"