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for Illusions of Life

by Despina

person jessica
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love you story. it is graet, have you writen any more? if you have i would like to read them to.
person A. Lafaye
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! but personally i don\'t think its over yet. shuuichi still has to face up to everything he has done and repair what happened with his friends. but you are working this out wonderfully. yuki may be the one to push shuuichi back into control but its still shuuichi who will always be the one to open up yuki for their relationship. nice job. keep it up.
by the way, i don\'t think i\'ve ever read anyone who is really good a cliffhangers. every single one of your chapters leaves the reader wanting more. nice.
person A. Lafaye
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! but personally i don\'t think its over yet. shuuichi still has to face up to everything he has done and repair what happened with his friends. but you are working this out wonderfully. yuki may be the one to push shuuichi back into control but its still shuuichi who will always be the one to open up yuki for their relationship. nice job. keep it up.
by the way, i don\'t think i\'ve ever read anyone who is really good a cliffhangers. every single one of your chapters leaves the reader wanting more. nice.
person A. Lafaye
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was totally AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! but personally i don\'t think its over yet. shuuichi still has to face up to everything he has done and repair what happened with his friends. but you are working this out wonderfully. yuki may be the one to push shuuichi back into control but its still shuuichi who will always be the one to open up yuki for their relationship. nice job. keep it up.
by the way, i don\'t think i\'ve ever read anyone who is really good a cliffhangers. every single one of your chapters leaves the reader wanting more. nice.
person Reikachan
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kindly have mercy and update asap. thnks.
person Sika Kuriyama
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wha...Wow.

Can I go ahead and say it? I love this story. I do believe it\'s one of the best I\'ve ever read...
And still no lemon! How naughty. (Or not.) You\'re drawing it out on us. Oh, well, I\'m not complaining. I didn\'t even notice till I decided to review.

Keep it up.
person A. Lafaye
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great. You\'re pulling it off great that Yuki is the only one who would be able to fight Shuuichi and cure the pain. He\'s the only one who knows that that is what it takes and the others just can\'t imagine doing that sort of a thing to help their friend.
Keep it up! Its going great!

PS sorry about the short review earlier. my computer was getting ready to crash so i had to make it quick.
person Reikachan
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi. great story you have going on here. me like lots.
person meikouhaikistune(noy logged in)
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo you cant end itthere you have got to update. SOOON!!!!! You Have GOT TO ITS NOT A CHOICE UPDATE PLEASE YOUR Write so well it makes your stomach turn because of the feelin you put in to the text its like watching a movie or reading a novel please continue your great writting please!!!!!!!!!!!1
person nubiti
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*can\'t say anything because she\'s being to shocked* OH MY F*CKING GOD! This really is one of the best stories I\'ve ever read about gravitation! you make the characters look so alive! *adores*

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