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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written story you got here. Relatives can be a bitch ey? Well, Battle field1942 is a great game, i perfer more modern combat genres, butt i dip into ww2 every so often. I have a solution for your caffine problem, or energy deficeet, call it what you will. First off, get 5 packages of smarties hard candy, one amp energy drink(or bottle of mountain dew), and one redbull crush the smarties into powder, pour them into a large glass with the other two drinks stir, and drink, i promise you won't be sleeping for at least a week! Any way, I got to get going, great story, keep up the good work.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderfully written, good opening and great characters A+
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOUNTAIN DEW IS THE BEST SODA POP EVER!!!!!!!!! ALL HAIL MOUNTAIN DEW!!!!! AND ALL HAIL THIS AUTHOR FOR HIS GREAT AGKNOLEGEMENT!!!!!!!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MOUNTAIN DEW RULES ALL!
It has kept me awake, or lulled me to sleep.
origional, code red, live wire, pitch black (taste like a wine cooler), pitch black 2 (with the sour bite that is more of a tang).
Slurpees are good too.
Live wire and code red are better frozen in my opinion.
but you can drink the origional hot, room temp, or cold, there is no end to the possibilities.
it even mixes well with hard candies, or the chewy ones, even kool-aid. I like to put blue sweet tarts in mine every now and again.
no other soda has so many possibilities.
i usually follow a long MD kick with a short burst of Dr. Pepper, root beer, or cream soda... that way when i get the mountain dew again my body has lost a bit of the tollerance to the large ammount of caffene in MD.
Makeing the kick that much better.
With all the money i spend on MD, i should invest in pepsie company.
The only disappointment i had from MD, was amp... it didn\'t even taste like MD, and it wasn\'t even any good, no rush, bad flavor.
I forgive them.
But I\'ll never forgive coke for comeing out with their nasty ass energy drink they dubbed FULL THROTTLE!
wel, with that out of the way, i\'m gonna get me a glass of MD.
It has kept me awake, or lulled me to sleep.
origional, code red, live wire, pitch black (taste like a wine cooler), pitch black 2 (with the sour bite that is more of a tang).
Slurpees are good too.
Live wire and code red are better frozen in my opinion.
but you can drink the origional hot, room temp, or cold, there is no end to the possibilities.
it even mixes well with hard candies, or the chewy ones, even kool-aid. I like to put blue sweet tarts in mine every now and again.
no other soda has so many possibilities.
i usually follow a long MD kick with a short burst of Dr. Pepper, root beer, or cream soda... that way when i get the mountain dew again my body has lost a bit of the tollerance to the large ammount of caffene in MD.
Makeing the kick that much better.
With all the money i spend on MD, i should invest in pepsie company.
The only disappointment i had from MD, was amp... it didn\'t even taste like MD, and it wasn\'t even any good, no rush, bad flavor.
I forgive them.
But I\'ll never forgive coke for comeing out with their nasty ass energy drink they dubbed FULL THROTTLE!
wel, with that out of the way, i\'m gonna get me a glass of MD.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start. It sounds good so far. :-)
I guess my suggestion would be to get a beta reader. There\'s an excellent Yahoo group for that purpose. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders
I guess my suggestion would be to get a beta reader. There\'s an excellent Yahoo group for that purpose. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders