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for Marine Trap

by YaoiMuffin

person Koi-chan
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:] I love your stories! I suggest you make a sequel! I like your disclaimers and comedy acts. Hilarious. Actually, I don't really care what you do, just keep on writing!! Wanna lnow why? 'Cause I love your stories!! :]
person TreeStar
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i know you want this to be done, but can you write another lemon chapter? i really like yours. i could go on reading them forever as long as you kept them up. i think a lot of people agree with me! i don't even care who is on top as long as they do it, because it's so intence. let's have some mroe teasing! please? i want to see how far one can drive the other up the wall. They've both been in a rush and impatient (understandably), but lets see Zoro plan to tease Luffy or vice-versa so that we can see them really beg for it. or you could do both! one could do it, and then the other one gets revenge later. :) Please?
person Kuragari Okami
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Updated and finished....I'm glad it ended on such a happy note *sigh* I lurved it!!!!>^.^<
person Ludra
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! GOD HATES ME!!!!! I KNEW IT!!!!! ….WHY!!!???...T^T *sniff*…why you don’t let Zoro be uke forever???...T^T…anyway…* sigh* I only like the chapter 6. Why always happen this to me!!!¬¬**** sorry I’m disappointment again…*big sigh*. Look, I’ll be very honest, I don’t LIKE your fic!!!!, but don’t get me wrong, you write very well, better than others that I read and the story is not so bad, but I’m very special in some matters. I truly love Luffy/Zoro and I HATE Zoro/Luffy, in other words, I dislike with my heart to Luffy being Uke. Anyway, good fic no matter I don’t like it, I know others (not like me and I know it’ll be 99%....u_u) would love your fic.

Keep going!

P.S: ¡¡¡¡¿¿¿Por qué siempre me pasa esto a mí???!!!! T^T

L.M.N
Ludra Maco Naít
person MCC
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and again this stupid site removed my review *growls* but I will stay calm, and just wright a new review
great fic!
person Noriko Sakuma
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *makes the 'yay-I-got-another-beautiful-and-smuty-chap' dance xD*

No one can get enough of your fics |3 They're like a drug O.o (a good drug |3)

Please more? *-* (not necessarily on this fic xD but a fic made by you haha)
person Noriko Sakuma
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They really find them in a pretty ackward pose xD hahaha

It was hilarious

I hope to see more of your lovwely fics soon!!! =3

~Noriko
person liera
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaa~~ u wanna see zoro on top b4 u end this ><
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. I very much liked. will there be more chapters?
person Ludra
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!! XDD

Wow!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! YAY okay I was disappointment with the third chapter but only because this was a really good Luffy/Zoro lemon, I can forget it hahahahahahahaha XDDD yay!!! so this fic is Luffy/Zoro after all and no Zoro/Luffy, great!!!! I love that form XD, so if that's case, I'll read them all XDD and love it!!! hahahahahahahahaha

Update soon!!!!

L.M.N
Ludra Maco Naít

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