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for Marine Trap

by YaoiMuffin

person Kuragari Okami
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I....Like it!! YAY!write more!>^.^<
person liera
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg....luffy as seme? O.o It feels strange no matter how many times i see it ><
person Noriko Sakuma
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_____O OH MY GACKT!!!!

ASDSFSDG!! ÑLKJÑLKHH!! ZXZXCV!! PQIRKOÊI!! X_______X *noriko's head explode*


That was unexpected... ... ... but awesome XD very well worked... though seme Luffy always cracks me up lol but I liked this ^3^

Is it... gonna be more?? more pretty please with cherry on top???? *puppy eyes*

NOW! I just finished your fic! But nobodys want's to help me translate it snif! T___T (they're not a AceLu fans and they think I'm sick <.< >.> lol) but I'll do my best to translate it for you!!!! >_____<
person NorikoSakuma
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Zoro.... Luffy.... smex... NOW... O___O

xD No no, really I'll be happy with whatever you'll write *dance* yay! I'm liking this fic to much! You made my day worth =3

And actually spanish is my first lenguage lol And I'm still learning english teh heh ^^Uu a friend of mine says that spanish sounds very romantic lol

anyway, keep up teh great fic!!! *hug*
person The Empress
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, I love your story. =) I'd like them to get away first and then some action. ~_^ I want them to kick some marine butt, especially the ones that raped them. Please. ^_^

I could've sworn I reviewed this story before.. It must've got deleted or something. Either that or I'm blind. T_T
person Noriko Sakuma
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuuuuu I need more XD

anyways, yes, i'm already writing your fic YAY! then I'll need to find some translator and some beta lol cuz i'm writing it in spanish haha ^^;

but anyway, keep going !! x3
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG they removed my review ;__;

So i'm giving you another one!! ^^

OMFG!!

I want to see what happen next... NOW! O_Ó

xD

No really, I'm such a masochits lol I'm loving your history! please keep it up!! *gives you cookies*
person Ludra
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!!! XD

I'd like to see Zoro get some trauma by the rape thing or something similar, it would be COOL XDDD hehehehehehe and please do this fic Luffy/Zoro T^T I begging you...please update soon. I like your fic n_n. By the way, I'll like to read a Lemon chapter, yeah! I'd like to read the Zoro's rape very explicit XD.

L.M.N
Ludra Maco Naít
person Kuragari Okami
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Onegai means Please......nice work...wanna read more...update soon...*sounds like a drone*..>^.^<: I love ZORO!!!*squee*
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah an update! For the love of mike, please make this a zolo/Luffy fic. There are just not enough of them. Oh and please touture Luffy. It seems that people torture everyone but Luffy. And Luffy torture is so angesty. Please please please.PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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