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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luff this. The \'rules\' of courtship were most funny! I can picture both dragging their relationship like that in the manga XD
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
‘Let me prickle you with my everlasting hook.’
That sent shivers of pleasure through my spine. Burr. I understand Integra\'s seduction (courtship?) perfectly well. Who could resist? Why she should resist if she’s in control? Her strength and dominance during the ordeal of a maiden is very realistic. Courtly Love theme at it\'s best. Not simpering maidens crying for men to rescue them but women leaders and their followers devoted to their service and love. Simply marvellous!
That sent shivers of pleasure through my spine. Burr. I understand Integra\'s seduction (courtship?) perfectly well. Who could resist? Why she should resist if she’s in control? Her strength and dominance during the ordeal of a maiden is very realistic. Courtly Love theme at it\'s best. Not simpering maidens crying for men to rescue them but women leaders and their followers devoted to their service and love. Simply marvellous!
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Very* nicely written! You have an unique flavour in atmosphere and dialogue. This story made me a hopeless romantic.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! This is the best piece of steamy het smut I have read in a while. Your characterizations are dead on! My favorite scene is when Integral pounces Alucard to the ground. A classic.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Blew my head away with the awesomeness this story is. Can you write a sequel, please?
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo. O=
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its so, so good to see an intelligent writer. I loved the courtly love theme throughout the story. Great work.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see you finally got this edited, Lorena! I love the story, the pairing is more easy to enjoy because Alucard is more tolerating now. Great use of the courtly love theme, fits perfectly in their relationship.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously yummy, Thess! Sex among the impaled has a wicked sense of the forbidden. The dialogue was the strongest as usual, so… sensual, made me melt in shivers.
*-* Marisa *-*
*-* Marisa *-*
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am taking a cold shower now, I could babble of how the positions were perfect, the dialogue was brilliant, the characterizations real, the violence erotic but I won\'t bore you. Tipping my hat at your talent, lady. Thanks for the best story I have read this week! This is how fanfiction should be written. Five stars if not more!