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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your lemon is not so bad , i have seem lots worse. It kept moving along which I like sometimes i think they take too long. I mean really are people going to have sex forever when they are outside? So you did good, you could add a little more but alll in all good. Now I am wondering what the other two are going to do ?????? Looking forward to next chapter (YES, REALLY!) lol
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHH!!!! What a horrible cliffie. No way am I lettin ya leave it there. Update soon again! I hafta know what\'s Goku gonna do. I\"ll be checkin often. Update soon.
~IceAngel~
~IceAngel~
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! DAMN YOU!!! I was so into the story, and I went to read the next chapter, wondering how Goku would react, etc.. only to see there ISN'T a next chapter!! Please, update soon!! please please please!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stop leaving us hanging!!!!!!!!!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm still with you. Lemons are my favorite fruit by the way. (wink) You are coming along fine i like the pairings you have they are my favs. Am on edge of my seat to see what happens now that Goku is awake, Keep the faith you can do it because so far it's great.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story! I hope you update soon!
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good and well thought out , but the chapters ccould be a little bit longer or your readers miight lose interest.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!