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thank you very good - have you done the second or are going to would like to read more of your work

Well this definetly merits a review... I mean, wow. (To quote Dee)

You really captured the emotions Dee would have gone through really well. I really felt for him, and for Ryo.

Heh, it was really hot too.

Note to self: stop saying 'really'

that was so entirely cute! loved it...great writing. i hope part II will be out shortly?

huh, forgot i\'d already read this one too....

so wonderful. ^_^ le sigh. u do sap sooooo well. & i don\'t like sap. it just winds up being the perfect combination of angst, love, & sex. You know just how to twist a scene that it ends up either hilarious or sooo sweet.
it\'s fan writers like u who make us otaku girls hopeless in real relationships. we just keep expecting those kind of moments. ^_~
Keep it coming!

& good luck with your for- profit ventures! ^_^

I really love this pairing, and this series, and you\'ve done an extrordinary job with it. The issues you dealt with here were very real, and fit so well into the gritty nature of this manga. I look forward to your part II.

What a fabulous second chapter, as lovely and interesting as the first. This fic is proving to be a wonderful addition to the world of FAKE fanfiction. Once again, your characterization of both Dee and Ryo was very accurate, and yet you still managed to take them to new and exciting levels. While finding out about Dee's past may have taken this in a darker direction than I normally associate with FAKE, you presented it in such a way that it was absolutely believable and engrossing - both the retelling of Dee's past, as well as Ryo's react to it. Well done. Very few people manage to portray Ryo as strongly or securely as you have, without loosing all of the "little bits" that keep Ryo Ryo. And never once when I am reading this story do I feel like I am not reading a story about two adult men, facing all of the challenges that adults face when further developing a relationship. Really really well done, exciting, fascinating and heart warming all at once. I can't wait to see where you take this story to next. Please update soon.

Amazing I love your style. I've read both of your works and I loved both of them. If you neeed a beta (an editor for spelling/grammar or anything else) give me letter shadowbird89@yahoo.com

OMG< sooo good and cute, I like that Ryo was all nonchlant about what Dee use to do, Please Update soon!!! It's so cute and good,

Oh man! Another great chapter! I really love how you write this engrossing conversation these two are having. Dee's shameful past and how Ryo is lovingly and fiercely convincing him that it doesn't matter...soooo good!^^ And thanks for making Ryo firmly resolved in his love for Dee. I've been reading too many fics where Ryo is doubtful, tentative, unsure...just plain scared of who he is and his attraction to Dee. So this is quite a refreshing change! Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing! Also, those cute pet names they have for each other is a hoot! Numb nuts! LOL^^

Wow! That was good, Please update soon!!!! I liked it, it was sexy!!!