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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Where is the second chapter?? You can't leave me hanging here and now?? Please, write the story *begs* I do want to know why Shuichi did it. I loved the first chapter: the way you captured Eiri, and I think you could characterized Shuichi as well.
So, please...
So, please...
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW< UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE
Cheers
Crmy
Cheers
Crmy
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay you have me interested. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your fanfic was good, well written, Yuki's personality is a bit off but it is still good. And you have good suppense, i really wanna find out why Shuichi would do that.... and i completely follow you on the want to "borrow" Yuki, lol.
hope you update soon ^.^
hope you update soon ^.^
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Usually, I don't like stories written in the first person. Yet, this one managed to captivate me. I suppose when it's done correctly, the reader can get drunk off the emotions of the person describing the events around him. And I could definitely feel the emotion there. The words were well-strung together, and the transitions were relatively smooth.
Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
}x{ Krystal [xxx]
Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
}x{ Krystal [xxx]
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, i love<3 angsty stories like this ^--^. This is extremly well written in my opinion ,and I cant wait for an update! Must find out why Shu-chan did that to himself TT^TT!!
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is new to me- a fic with a suicide attempt that is. You handled that very well and I know it's a touchy subject so I commend you for that. :) Poor Shuichi, I wonder why he wanted to take his life? :( You're such a good writer, your first sentence pulled me right in! Not to mention the summary was intriging in itself. I never read a fic with a bad summary, and yours completly peeked my interest. I'm glad it did too, because I'm seriously loving this. Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the update. I'm so curious, I want more! ^^
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eiri sounds settled and comfortable in his relationship with Shuichi so I am somewhat intrigued as to what pushed Shuichi over the edge. Nicely written too.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start but you need to get busy with it to keep readers.
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!