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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Heehee~
Nice~!
The part when Mao saw them--I find it funny~
Nice~!
The part when Mao saw them--I find it funny~
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Storyline, loved the lovemaking scene, when are u going to add to the story :)
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February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome. i love this anime and it makes me sad that there isn't that much written over FMP. i love that you nailed the characters so well. very, very well written!!!
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... so sweet, and hot... very VERY hot... and SEXY!!! I loed it =P
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September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cute. the sex was short on the foreplay but we can chalk that up to pent up sexual urges on both of the parties. nice job.
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just splendid. I liked the whole "Sousuke isn't as cluess as he acts" bit. That was a nice touch. Whith him it is hard to tell. Is some of it really an act or is he really that clueless when it comes to "real life".
But I think your portrayal of their characters was really well done. That was some really heated passion at the end too. Three times in mere minutes (or so I assume minutes), that's pretty good for a couple of first timers. :)
But I think your portrayal of their characters was really well done. That was some really heated passion at the end too. Three times in mere minutes (or so I assume minutes), that's pretty good for a couple of first timers. :)
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story, you descriptions were well written, both regarding the landscape and the characters. I enjoyed the final scene with mao, sosuke, and kaname quite a bit.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Detailed. I wish there was even more.
Ja.
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Ja.
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how much I adore the story you wrote. It was absolutely amazing. I loved the plot, the dialogue, and the sex scene was perfect. Plus Sosuke and Kaname are my absolute favorite couple in the anime world so this story made me super happy. If only that could actually happen! Great Job! You're and awesome writer. Keep up the great work!
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June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahah i loved it ^^ if you added another chapter that would be great! im sure you could expand on this keep it up