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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in knowing what happens, of course. But I want to point out a few things.
Perhaps it's a good thing to look for a Beta Reader or reviewing the story yourself with a spell checker before submitting. Your use of past vs. present tense also needs some work. There are several sites available for getting a Beta Reader, or even if you ask a friend, I'm sure they'd be happy to do it for you.
I'm relatively new to the world of Gravitation, though I am highly interested in finding out more.
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I love the title, by the way. <3
Perhaps it's a good thing to look for a Beta Reader or reviewing the story yourself with a spell checker before submitting. Your use of past vs. present tense also needs some work. There are several sites available for getting a Beta Reader, or even if you ask a friend, I'm sure they'd be happy to do it for you.
I'm relatively new to the world of Gravitation, though I am highly interested in finding out more.
^-^
I love the title, by the way. <3
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. How cruel. I want to know what happens next