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person Cat91900
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You honestly did a really great job. It's hard to get a chose your own adventure to work properly but managed to do it. I have never had a better read from one.

There were some spelling, and grammar errors but it wasn't too bad. Also was the lack of a chapter 5 on purpose or was it removed for some reason?
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the most awesome thing in the world. You TOTALLY made my day, thank you. Even if Shun was a bit weepy (having read the manga), but who cares? Suka-chan was hysterically idioticly him. I liked Shinobu being overly cool, but my understanding of him is that NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS, Shinobu is in control. And I'm sure he made lots of money off this whole thing, sang and dance included. ^^

Good job. I can't even comprehend what it would take to organize this thing. You win the internetz.
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tee hee! this is fun! there should be more greenwood fic out there!
person Fuyuki
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I finally found a HasukawaxShun fic. I <3 you! I definitely prefer this to Mitsuru/Shinobu(mind you i still luv them too)
person StoryJunkie
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rats. I got eaten by the Grue. It was a somewhat interesting experience.
Well, back to page one.
schedule August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew I could count on someone to be devoured. Love that Grue!

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