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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is good, but you need to indicate when it is Yuki or Shuichi POV. Also, "Thoma" is spelled "Tohma."
Other then that, update soon
Cheers
Crmy
Other then that, update soon
Cheers
Crmy
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really angsty. I loved it.^^ Keep it up.
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another sad and angsty story... pls continue writing.. i love reading angsty stories..
so is yuki really cheating on shuichi...?
so is yuki really cheating on shuichi...?
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea behind this story, I really do. But maybe you need to find yourself a beta. There are a lot of grammar mistakes.