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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz! in our lord's almighty name continue !
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Come on you gotta write more.
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Has a good start ay. The one thing that got me is how inconsistant your sentances are. Cut out some of them 'ands' mate! It doesn't matter if the sentance is only 5 words long. Its a brain strain just trying to read a story with almost no full stops. The idea is good but PLEASE get into the habit of putting in a full stop instead of an 'and'.
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story, please write more!!!
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good but you leave people hanging
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
too tell you the truth this is my favorite paring up (luffy & robin)
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a sucker for unique pairings, especially ones I've never thought of before. More please.