rate_review Reviews

Hey~!

I didn't actually read this fic~

Just the ending~

And of course, your explanation about stuff~

And I agree with you about your analysis of Tessa/Sousuke/Kaname~

All in all, in the end, I just want to say I'm a Sousuke/Kaname fan forever~ and I hope that you'll make more fics about them in the future--with the same caliber as 'I Couldn't Move On' or better than that~ ^^

I just read both fics and I have to admit, this one although very dark rocks. I feel that everything has been elevated into a new level where the story is almost less like Full metal panic and more like ghost in the shell with the questions of existence and the likes. i would have liked it expanded upon considering the plot itself was quite short, however I like how the reader must draw their own conclusion. Things like this are what elevate a story from common to something that leaves a bigger impression. I am impressed with your work and will continue to read and look for further updates.

I read and loved both of your FMP fics....but please, don't leave "Ghosts Always Come Back" at such a bad cliffhanger! You did such a wonderful job and it made me cry at some parts (I'm a big crybaby...^^) It also makes me wish that in some future novel, Sousuke and Kaname will FINALLY get together. But anyways....Please give me a happy ending for your story. ;-; Pretty please? If I would have known it was going to end like that...I wouldn't have read the last chapter, it just makes me sad not knowing what will happen...!!! ;-;

Very well written story when Style, grammar, and story telling techniques are Concerned, but a bit disappointing at the end and the fact that there was barely any Soususke X Kaname interaction, lemon or not. Hopefully you develop more on this story and turn things around because I'll be looking forward to it... you're an incredibly talented writer!

Good angsty story. But please add a third volume, one with a more happy ending, it makes me sad when those two are sad.