rate_review Reviews

I'm sort of reading these backwards so I have not gotten a hold of your other fics. If you appreciate criticism then you'll appreciate this. Great story! I especially liked the part where Kanako lost control of the situation even if it was for a little while. I fell in love with Love Hina when I saw a revamped short video clip of Naru and Keitaro.

Keep up the good work. Hope you can turn this story into a good plot. I must admit, it has great potential.

This is probably the hottest story up here right now.

You really oughta continue. Given how meek Shinobu and how intimidating Kanako can be I'm sure they could keeps things on the down-low.

Hell, Kanako has shown that she has no problem dressing other people up, so getting out of being cauht shouldn't be as impossible as one would think.

"Snooping Around Pays Off"... Pays off!

I really like what you did with Kanako/Shinobu/Keitaro, with Kanako as the instigator to everything. Given her character, we knew she wouldn't stop until she got what she wanted, but you had her accept and integrate Shinobu fairly seamlessly (but who can help but love our dear Shinobu, anyway?).

Keitaro, lucky bastard that he is, just stumbles into things, the beneficiary of your wonderful setup.

'Eh, what's this? Two cute girls want to have sex with me??? Well, then...'

Sometimes I want to kick him in the pants.

I'll have to check out your other stories.

Ja.

W.

This was really hot! It was great how Kanako acted as a perfect link to keep the threesome together. I hope you find inspiration to write other fics with Kanako instructing Shinobu into the arts of sex.

I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you write something else soon.

Freakin' awesome dude. you have a hell of a way writing these stories. can't wait for the next one!

Sweet and juicy fic, i like your idea of a threesome, it was really cool and hot well written, you should writte a sequel but no one shot this time, my original language is spanish too by the way

My original language is Spanish, so I hope you excuse me if there is some error in this review. Even so I read this wonderful fic and the previous one, with difficulties, but it was worth the effort.
The scenes hentai were very good. As you had said there is not many fic of this style with Kanako and much less one with shinobu participation for what I encourage you to continue.