rate_review Reviews

Ha~!

Wow~!

Wish there's more~!!! ^^

Awesome story, though a lot of mechanical errors.

Also, Kaname's hair is black, but that's a minor complaint.

*giggle*

So glad you updated.

Woh ! Very Good ! I need More !

Everyone is so in character it's scary. However, your spelling is so appalling that I can't help but think either (a) you purposefully misspelled half the story, though for what purpose I couldn't say, or (b) you're a teenager who snuck onto the site and really isn't old enough to be here, or (c) English is not your native language. If none of these are correct, then you should probably dictate your fics from now on, until you go back and finish fourth grade. To sum it up, the story was excellent, chaacterization was excellent, spelling was so bad it distracted the reader from the other two things. 2 out of 3 ain't bad.

See previous review.

holy smokes hope you continue this story