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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter. sara is one of my three favorites in the LH series. Keep up the good work
Your humble servant and fan
-Twisted Darkness-
Your humble servant and fan
-Twisted Darkness-
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off great chapter. second i am sorry to hear about your arm. i hope it gets better soon
Your humble servant and fan
-Twisted Darkness-
Your humble servant and fan
-Twisted Darkness-
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome...hope your arm gets better
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shirai & hataini will die hmm...
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Frickin LOVED this chapter! I appreciate how you wrote the Shinobu/Motoko scene and the transformation shinobu nderwent suited her well. looking forward to the next chapter. your works are truly that of an expert writer.
Your humble servant and fan,
-Twisted Darkness-
Your humble servant and fan,
-Twisted Darkness-
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April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go a easy on Shinobu will ya in the next chapter. After all was was the nicest to Motoko. Maybe have Keitaro join her. After all Shinobu dreams about Keitaro being her 1st.
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is extremely awesome, but I gotta say, one of the best parts of it is that you're really perfectly making note of the character flaws in each girl as they're taken...it's really cool.
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
again...nice job...i wish my character could be in your story. email me and lets see what happens
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story just keeps getting more interesting. keep up the good work
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is going awesome, but its too bad su had to become her adult form...dont get me wrong, shes sexier that way, but still, i love seeing loli yuri...shinobu just wont be the same. oh well! its still lots of fun to read, never stop writing!