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May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe you're welcome! *huggles* I enjoyed this chapter, can't wait to read the next oneee~ =]]
schedule
May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I like the whole Matt/Mello/L love triangle, interesting idea, I think it worked. The porn was pretty hot, too! Spelling and grammar is fine in most places, I like the use of simple sentences. Few mistakes in places, just needs a little proof-reading! Shame chapter two was so short, hope you update soon! :]