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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably hot. I just got hooked on this pairing and you portrayed them as I had hoped someone would. You made it sad at the very end, though. The dialogue after L and Light made love had me tearing up a little. It's so true, you know. If they had been sexually and romantically involved in the actual series, it would have made things even sadder. You can feel that sort of angst poaring off the manga... anyway, great job!
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hoo, that was hot. O_O Wowee. 10/10.
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful characterization. I don't have much to say, save that this is strikingly well-written... sordid and yet soundly depressing, as any fiction that points to the inevitabilities of the series is. Yes. Well done.
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was fucking hot
the thought of L...jerking himself off and actually acting human made me read this twice O_o;;;;;
Oi I like Raito-kun and L in this one; Raito actuallys acts like a man instead of asexual, and how L just acts like L and their games is just twisted and exciting.
But....I didn't think when L took his boxers off and how he just road him like that; did he prepare himself DURING jacking off or.....
*puts her brain in the backseat again* it was good, it was hot, and I hope you have more
the thought of L...jerking himself off and actually acting human made me read this twice O_o;;;;;
Oi I like Raito-kun and L in this one; Raito actuallys acts like a man instead of asexual, and how L just acts like L and their games is just twisted and exciting.
But....I didn't think when L took his boxers off and how he just road him like that; did he prepare himself DURING jacking off or.....
*puts her brain in the backseat again* it was good, it was hot, and I hope you have more