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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is incredibly good. I absolutely love the premise of the story, although it took me a few paragraphs to work out what was going on since the story actually started a little ways into the situation.
I love the struggle for control, and it works so well in the Death Note fandom that I can't get enough of it. Incredibly hot as well - right down to L calling Light 'Kira-sama', and Light refusing to react to remarks on his identity, and L's dialogue in the middle of it all ("What you really wanted... what you needed"), and Light's answers.
Yay! I love this story. I hope you continue to write for Death Note.
I love the struggle for control, and it works so well in the Death Note fandom that I can't get enough of it. Incredibly hot as well - right down to L calling Light 'Kira-sama', and Light refusing to react to remarks on his identity, and L's dialogue in the middle of it all ("What you really wanted... what you needed"), and Light's answers.
Yay! I love this story. I hope you continue to write for Death Note.
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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved this. I love L as seme and you wrote this wonderfully.
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
best mind game LxL I read period (one shot wise!)
mmm...love dominate!L and the tension of raito's personality and reality. This was just too good for words.
I actually....tired of LxL but I want to see more from ya...if it's death note or a series I know about
mmm...love dominate!L and the tension of raito's personality and reality. This was just too good for words.
I actually....tired of LxL but I want to see more from ya...if it's death note or a series I know about
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good sotry
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, very nice. I loved the whole "lose control" bit, very clever!