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for Much Needed Time Off

by dreamsofcrows

person kUmAgoRo-BeAm
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
person aoh
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what... what?? omg - what is hiro going to do with those divorce papers?? sign them? *snigger* stupid men, one hot night and then they just have to ruin it. it's really hiro's fault. naaargh i'm torn in two. i love drama, but at the same time i want fluff and sex. but, hey, not necessarily in that combination - there's also sex and drama, right? (and fluff and drama but that reminds me of stupid things and angst, which i don't like.) hmm. oh i guess is should just go to bed and keep my fingers crossed (in my sleep) for another chapter soon :D
person mamarita
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How sneaky... so, Hiro will be back...can't wait.. this is really good!!! thanks. and update soon, please
person angee
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's getting quite good. I wonder what Hiro has in mind...I think perhaps the papers have a date with a lighter and a waste basket, ne? OOOh I love ThE DOMINANT K...it's sooooo hot.
person mamarita
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love chapter 5.. and I can see where this is going to head........hehehe
person aoh
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!!
i thought the last chapter was a bit rushed, or at least i didn't get in the mood so much when i read it, but this chapter really worked for me. hiro screaming at k is great. especially since he's such a relaxed guy usually. i liked the dialogue. i liked the fact that k didn't let hiro go. i should read it again XD
can't wait for another chapter!
person aoh
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"he turned to look at the origin of the noise"
i can be a sloppy reader, but i don't think you mentioned a noise before :)
person mamarita
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
4chapters.... great beginning.... now... OMG... this is going to be soooo good!
person angee
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAA.....I'M REALLY INTO THIS FIC. GREAT JOB. :0)
person Hestia
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'll give it time--but I do like Hiro wondering about K's hair and noticing it enough to see it isn't in peak condition. Good set up, cute stuff with Shuichi!

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