rate_review Reviews

Why aren't there more of this pair? It was good, but needs more detail.

This was a great story and I agree with the last review there was never enough about Kirie’s big sexy boobs so I’m going to right my own story based on just that concept

This was pretty good and I enjoyed it. One thing I really wanted to see in the show was more emphasis or fondling of Kirie's breasts, since her breasts were mostly just for show and were off limits. Kinda made that a boring part because you knew when you saw her that nothing majory sexy was going to happen. I know that she could take care of herself and hated being touched, but come on I'm sure a lot of guys wanted to see her enjoy being fondled or a lot more Kirie. So it'd be cool to see a fanfic that focuses on her breasts. By the way, I'm a Kirie/Yukinari fan.

awesome story! i love the ending.

While this really goes against canon, it's fairly decent. I'm surprised that something this good can come from a challenge that clearly violates canon.