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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really excited to see the outcome of this story! :) I hope it's updated soon!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Akito victim of his hormons(a happy family?!?),Hatori is a bastard...poor Emiko or Aimu!
i really will miss this story!
i really will miss this story!
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December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story! I really like the plot and I cant wait for the next update. Update soon!
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really, really, really good... I really hope you update soon, because I can't wait to read the future chapters. Hopefully you'll continue it.
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December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
surprise,surprise!I've thought because Hatori is the seehoarse,he would be pregnant!
It's nice from you to update,so we don't need to wait too long,thank you!
Again,the chapter was a little short,but good.I can kick Hatori's ass and feel bad for poor Aki!
I hope Aki will seduced Hatori again!
thank you
It's nice from you to update,so we don't need to wait too long,thank you!
Again,the chapter was a little short,but good.I can kick Hatori's ass and feel bad for poor Aki!
I hope Aki will seduced Hatori again!
thank you
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like female Akito best.But I like yaoi with Akito,and Akito Hatori are a great couple!
So Aki was in love with Hatori...make sense!
So Aki was in love with Hatori...make sense!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh girl,please don't cry,even if you don't get review!It doesn't mean the story is bad,but that people are foul!
I like the chapter,but it was short!
I like the chapter,but it was short!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"What was the purpose of saying such a thing?" and someone say Hatori is smart!
"Enjoy it. If you have to, close your eyes." my favorite line
Yes yes yes lemon is coming!
"Enjoy it. If you have to, close your eyes." my favorite line
Yes yes yes lemon is coming!
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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written lemon,maybe a little short,but good!
"Kana"oh,my...
We know about Aki's feeling,but Hatori? what is Aki for Hatori? an "accident","too long without","he is my God"???
Oh,why aren't you at mediaminer anymore?
"Kana"oh,my...
We know about Aki's feeling,but Hatori? what is Aki for Hatori? an "accident","too long without","he is my God"???
Oh,why aren't you at mediaminer anymore?
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, i like your writing style. i do think you are keeping the characters in character. but its difficult, for me at least, to give a good review, as the story has been so short so far. i am eager tho to see the rest of your story, and hope you continue.