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lol funny plot! i really liked it! to bad we don't get to see more!

You're a genius. That is all.

Hahaha
That was hilarious! Great idea.

...A CG Near scene could be fun.

Aaah! This is so cute! I'm trying to organize my thoughts here because they're still coming down from the story-high. So. I love your characterization of both of them! Mello's threats to him, Matt's personality and how he talks (I can see him making video game references in RL talk)... Perfect! I can see this happening, and was laughing at several points. This is so well-done... You also built up the tension between them beautifully, and Matt teasing Mello about the shower option and then the "definitely go for the belt" cracked me up as well. I loved this!

Hee, that was awesome. Funny *and* hot. :-)

O_O........omg........can i get a copy of that game??!!! XD.....wow Near way to be a perv XD...i loved this...wow....i mean...wow XD

*fans slef* sexy and very difrent i've read this at least twice and it just gets better!

This fanfic was so, so funny! I was laughing all the way through, and then the smex was ultra hot... I couldn't have been more pleased. Oh, and I think the concept for this fanfic is super impressive too! It's such a fresh and fun idea to have Near make a game and Matt and Mello play it, and you're the only one who would've ever thought of that. Very cool. Keep writing!

XD I totally loved it! Wow, Near is such a pervert!