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your personal life is more important than fanfics theres no rush man sorry just you know check in and say you will be delayed for a bit if you have a final exam of course thats important dont let me get in the way but if you stay quiet for too long we'll think you gave up just review once in a while in between chapters telling us your progress or anything that might come up like a final exam

sorry about the delay shinobu sensui, but i've been swamped with work and my final exam for the year at school. I haven't abandoned this, but time is precious for me. I will try to have the next chapter up within two weeks.

has this fic been abandoned? just making sure i dont know whats going on but i just wanted to know if you had been done with this story havent seen even a review from you as i said theres no rush but you should say something in the meanwhile so we dont think its done and if it is then what a shame

your story is doing good so far 857 views a 5 star rating from 4 people ...are you having writers block or is it hard to follow up to this.... it probably is so dont worry about time i mean everyone needs a break from this

Both of you make good points on the Misato thing, *ponders for a bit* I could work the inner misato thing into the story but i wont reveal how. Lets just say its not really misato that is sharing her own mind if that makes any sense. And also tanks for the honesty in your reviews so far ^.^

This is all great, wonderful stuff. The only part I have to say I could do without, was Misato's inner 'talking to myself'. That was, in a word, cheap. You can do better than that. You can do better than taking the shortcut by having Misato talking to herself as if she were someone else, to convince herself of her feelings. Thats all Im going to say.

i noted that flaw as well but i understand why you did this for one you said you havent written something in a long time you need time to stretch and organize yourself first i have the same problem challenge fics are particularly hard to write because you dont have absolute control over the story and need to check in to see if the person who requested is okay with it

this first chapter was a good start there isnt any time limit so take your time with the next chapter the last thing we want is for you to rush through this without gving it your best which would be a shame you obviously have great potential