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The links to the photos don't work. Can you help me?

how in the world the gang ended in company of a bunch of old Polar Bears? o.O

Also is Jade taking the pill? I mean will all those times she had sex she would be pregnant by now lol

Also she is back with Davis? I think I need to read the chapter before this one to understand better ^^;

Sorry for not leaving a comment before I fell ill from my stomach and I'm still ill -_-

But it's okay no one is perfect ^^

Wow two chapters, sorry about that you got caught at job, I know how that can be, I got caught once but luckily was just a workmate who didn't said a thing to the boss besides it was a free time I got since there was nothing to do at that moment XD

Oh and sorry for have pressed the PataGato thing a lot, guess I was too happy when you at first said you will try it only to then drop it off that I thought you could do it at least having them in love without any intimate thing but well I will shut up about that now ^^;

Sorry again about that.

Now about both chapters well poor Davis got his heart broken hope he gets love soon, the things get better and better each time ^^

I see you missed to upload a chapter which by the way you need to check the paragraphing on that chapter (chapter 18) it is a giant block of text, really hard to read x_X

Now yes it slipped that Cody was at the hospital some times that happens to me some things slip off lol

About this chapter 20 whoa Jade sure didn't saw that comming, a marriage proposal, now that will make things interesting.

Also you never replied my other comments about if you at least can put Pata and Gato in love as in just kissing and that stuff without the sex part, you only replied to other parts of my reviews ^^;

Oh well is good to see you're updating often again ^^

Heh, now Jade better pray to not end pregnant XD

I kinda had the feeling she and Ken would end together ^^

is really good but I wonder where are the others? they haven't appeared I think in the last three chapters except for Davis, I think Kari appeared on a the chapter before this one to talk with Davis who was depressed about Jade but that's all, no TK, no their digimon, no Tai, no the others, maybe they took a day off? XD

interesting chapter, poor Wormmon, I feel bad for him he sure misses the old Ken :(

And about Jade truth to be told I like her more with Ken XD dunno I feel they can complement each other very well, maybe you can pair Davis dunno.... with Catherine (french digidestined) perhaps? or another OC character? ^^

hehe sorry, guess that part slipped off so I didn't read it, that happens to me when I get called and when I return I lost track of where I left on the reading ^^;

But returning to the fic seems Ken is starting to show a good side of his, maybe that will make easier for the others to make him stop being the emperor, who knows? ^^

Poor Davis I feel pity for him, hope all gets fine for him ^^

Maybe Ken is falling for Jade? I mean he didn't even took advantage of her, now that's a new considering he chained her o.O

About changing it to WAFF and maybe a bit dom sounds good too, so then guess what I say of Pata and Gato just in love as in snuggle or sharing one or two kisses would be okay don't you think? is nothing that can bother you since is not getting to the animal thing, is just the normal as since they're civilized creatures they can express their feelings without the need of going to the um.... mating ^^;

Well if that's okay with you of course ^^

Why you will feel like an Hypocrite in a few chapters? ah you will write about other digimonxdigimon yiffing and can do the PataGato one?? you meanie! ;___;

You know how hard is find PataGato in hentai? and more if is one where Gatomon isn't portrayed as a slut? on top of that I have seen how poor Patamon is treated so bad in hentai mostly on VeeGato lemons, the poor guy is treated like trash, like if he was the worse digimon ever, not even Wormmon is treated like that ;____;

Okay I'm fine now ^^

Anyhow that's why I asked you to at least put the PataGato even if is they just dating and if you don't write explicit sex with them you can put them simply going behind some bushes to have some privacy and that's all, that's not that hard, that or the other option, their angel forms after all those are so human like except for the wings xD

Though really is not that hard write about digimon that look like animals mating, after all they are in a sort of way civilized, I mean they can talk, the know what is friendship, love and all those virtues, they think rationally, just do what most authors do, think of them as if they were humans, if you check most lemons you can see how most digimonxdigimon sex scenes use positions only humans would use including the oral treatment and even the err... backdoor if you know what I mean XD

About we being above 20 and Writing/Reading about a show for 13 year olds don't be that sure, I have lots of online friends between your age and mine that are into digimon and other animes too, is nothing to be ashamed of ^^

Now for this chapter Jade is in deep problems, Ken now sure will go hard with her since she knows his secret, this sure made the plot to thicken ^^