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Awww not even a Pata/Gato even if is just them in love even if you don't write a lemon scene? but tell me what problems you're having? you did it pretty good with the naughty Patamon on the other chapter when he was looking at Gatomon's butt XD

What was the problem with it? maybe I can help with that but if not I understand and thanks anyways ^^

Anyhow returning to this chapter, what's with the emperor and the digiegg factory? o.O

Err forget what I said about the emperor and the digiegg factory, I misread it ^^;

Izzy and Jade are on primary village right?

Me again with a good idea, well I think it is a good idea, if Gato/Pata is weird for you then why not Angemon/Angewomon? it would be like writing a human/human scene, only adding the wings XD

Get it? leave the kissing and some mushy stuff for when they are Gato and Pata, and the real err... "fun" for their angel forms ^^

Well is just a suggestions anyways ^^

Nice digimon, and Jade sure looks good too ^^

I wish I could draw :(

lol! naughty Patamon staring at Gatomon's behind, he sure wants to take her, who knows? maybe the Kaizer can fix that *pays the Kaizer lots of money to plan something to separate Gatomon and Patamon from the others* I'm so evil XD

TK and Kari arguing about the right path was really funny they argue like a married couple lol

Heh interesting way to become a digidestined, why it can't work for real? xD

So Jade a Digidestined? now that sure is what I call a twist ^^

Cody must hate you, you abandoned the poor guy to his luck since you didn't picked up the part of his rescue in few chapters lol

it keeps getting more and more interesting ^^

Pretty smart girl Jade is, and yeah I can see where you go on that of getting to know him TOO well xD

About the Davis asleep it was a funny comment I made, as in he didn't had any lines on the past few chapters due to that he was asleep after his fun with Jade, I'm really wondering how Joe will take it xD

At last Davis woke up, he has been asleep... for the last 3 chapters I think xD

Aww I missed you replying me on your author notes ^^;

Anyhow, getting really interesting and it sure is obvious Ken has other plans for her, but it is just me or they knew each other from before?

lol a bit more and we would have seen Kari hitting Tai with the messager, he was lucky they needed to got to help Cody or else he would be dead xD

About how to make the GatoPata work you can take a look at my lemons, actually is not that hard, now if what you need is find a situation in which they end say separated from the others on their own, so in that they end comforting each other and one thing leads to another well, you have the Kaizer, he sure will be so smart to come up with something that would split Gatomon and Patamon from the others, like send some enslaved digimon, like a group of Tyrannomon, something that can cause a big mess to make them get separated from the others ^^

if you need some suggestions just ask me I'll be glad to help you ^^

Another interesting chapter and how right Kari was about something being wrong and with Cody, she and TK must be psychics xD

And about Veemon and Armadillomon no, no, you misunderstood, what I was trying to say is that from the partners of the digidestined the only ones who had a mention or a few dialog lines were Veemon (when Jade heard Davis mentioning Veemon's name) and Armadillomon that was with Cody investigating about the Kaizer but I never meant it as in a VeeArmadillo pairing lol

The only digimonxdigimon I mentioned was PataGato when I asked you about what you mentioned about beast on your author notes and which I really hope you can add, I love those two as a couple besides the little orange winged guy (Patamon) deserves his fun with the kitty too XD

And what on this green earth is with Tai? has him been smoking weed or drinking too much? I would say that maybe the goggles are cutting the blood flood to his brain but he gave them to Davis xD

And because of Tai, Cody will be in deeper problems now o.O