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for Jade, Ice, and Talon

by LittleBlackKitten

schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I figured that much that Davis only in his mind thinks that Kari likes him because as I said on my other review Kari seemed too happy to have a go out to the movies with TK lol

Oh well, at least it won't be that hard for Davis, but if I were Davis I would pry for that Jade won't end pregnant, he finished inside her xD

Thanks for toss in the Takari.

just a question in the chapter 1 I saw you put that fic maybe will contain beast, that means you will add digimonxhuman scenes or digimonxdigimon ones? if is digimonxdigimon think you can add some with Patamon and Gatomon having their fun even if it is a small one? which by the way talking about those two wonder where they are? I mean the only digimon I saw mentioned so far were Veemon (just mentioned) and Armadillomon who is with Cody I think in the digiworld but other than that nothing about the other digimon o.O

Anyhow nice chapter, at least Davis had his fun ^^
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And why would Kari object about that Davis got a girl for himself? I mean for what I saw Kari and TK seem to be hanging out a lot more, she even said in the chapter 3 that she had a going to the movies with TK so I doubt she will mind that Davis got a girl ^^

Where I think she and the others for that matter will object would be if Davis gets Jade to the digiworld which I think he will do, she totally seduced him o.O

Well at least Joe will have with who to share the blame lol

Also and talking about TK and Kari going to the movies I liked that part, can't help it, is the Takari fan in me, I love that pairing (And PataGato too for that matter even though I treat both pairings individually, in a independient way but that's another story ^^), I like how TK and Kari complement each other really well and I'm not talking about their crests nor their digimon or anything like that, I'm just talking about their interaction, their close friendship, pretty aside of the digiworld and the fights and crests and such things ^^

Well you got your first review, keep up the good work and don't give up, the fic is getting really interesting ^^

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