rate_review Reviews

You captured Matsuda really well. This girl could just imagine him getting all shy and embarrassed like that too!

This fic was cute as *Hearts*

And the shower smut was fun, also.

A small question - wouldn't water wash away lubricant?

oh there are so many things wrong with this... oh so wrong! (*shivers*)

It's nice to finally see a LxMatsuda fic. :)
You write incredibly well.

oh...yeah~!

Lxmatsu goodness! Such a rare treat!

I loved the imagery as well as how it was just pwp with a beginning, middle, and end. this pairing is the only one that I can stand to such sugery goodness (LxRaito is....so so....and the other ones just remind me of buttsmex...yes even mello/matt and i'm a mello/matt fan!)

still just awesome and a good contribution to all the lxl ficlets

I have never read a more eloquently written work of art until now. Good job! I aspire to someday reach your level. ^_^

very hot

*squeals* This is the first LxMatsuda fic I've ever read and I loved it, loved Matsuda's pov he really drew me in. Great job!