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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mello raping near....
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try MeroNia MAX (sp?) doujinshi; it has mello raping near smexing
but besides that.....haven't reviewed in a while >< sorry. Still reading this off and on and it's just a new twist without completly mental raito in thiz XP
I personally own a crapload of death note doujinshi...
still good story
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try MeroNia MAX (sp?) doujinshi; it has mello raping near smexing
but besides that.....haven't reviewed in a while >< sorry. Still reading this off and on and it's just a new twist without completly mental raito in thiz XP
I personally own a crapload of death note doujinshi...
still good story
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September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bah you're nutter than me
well it was a trill but damm you and your open writing....it leaves a taste in my mouth
still good show; there were parts that made me go 'mmmmm dammit that made no sense!' but it was fixed...later on
well...well.....*shrug*
just make more stuffu
well it was a trill but damm you and your open writing....it leaves a taste in my mouth
still good show; there were parts that made me go 'mmmmm dammit that made no sense!' but it was fixed...later on
well...well.....*shrug*
just make more stuffu
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
This chapter ACTUALLY pushed me to sign-in..and I don't like signing in!
I loved how it ended with the conversation between the two before L [who has a
pretty last name] laid the ''whammy'' on Light/Raito. :-)
Now, I wonder what will you do for an encore. Personally, IF you ever decide for
a Part II or sequel, I would bring them back full circle to Japan, as a test of
faith & willpower. Can Light/Raito resist temptation?
By the way, what's up with you & the freakin' stairs???
This chapter ACTUALLY pushed me to sign-in..and I don't like signing in!
I loved how it ended with the conversation between the two before L [who has a
pretty last name] laid the ''whammy'' on Light/Raito. :-)
Now, I wonder what will you do for an encore. Personally, IF you ever decide for
a Part II or sequel, I would bring them back full circle to Japan, as a test of
faith & willpower. Can Light/Raito resist temptation?
By the way, what's up with you & the freakin' stairs???
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow.... after the last two chapters that's all I can say... wow... Anyway, love it!!!! totally love it!!! can't wait for the next chapter! I would vastly appreciate it if you could send me a notification so I don't miss it? PLEASE!? e-mail: leobdollin75@yahoo.com. love it!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg! i am completely in love with this story-- read the whole thing in one go! XD i almost cried when Light wrote down L's name! and then i cried again (but out of happiness) when he appeared in that doorway! this story has so many suspenseful moments i dont think that my heart can take it! XD cant wait for the next update!
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe so cute. I feared the worst after Light writing L's name, but I like the way this turned out. I can't wait to read more.
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I can't wait to find out why the death note didn't work.
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well... I'm glad he's not dead but at the same time... how's Raito going to talk himself out of that I wonder. "Ah, so yeah, I tried to kill you. About that... how are you here again. And... ah... forgive me... I know not what I do?"
As always, looking forward to more.
As always, looking forward to more.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapters. Very hot lemon. I like the house and the house arrest/kidnapping thing. Can't wait to read more.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay good chapter and nice plot twist at the end. Keeps things interesting. Maybe they'll get to some angry sex soon. Angry sex is fun. ^_^
-L
-L