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for Arcadia

by Duomi

person lyshitski
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Duomiiii! When the heck did you update?! Feb. 1st? What rock was I under?

This fic is so much fun to read. Light's perpetual irritation with...just about everyone is infinitely funny, and neither Mello nor Near are making things easier on him, are they? And the Death Note Bar and Grill?? LOL With Justin as a bartender? :3 You really should make that apron you mentioned in the A/N.

But I wonder what's up with Near's stalker? And I can't wait to see what happens when L pops into the picture, but I have a feeling I may have to wait *pokeUPDATEPLZpoke*
person tdorian
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is totally amazing ! You cracked me uo with Mello here, a dominatrix ! LOL Near is so mysterious, Riyuk... is still Riyuk eh eh ! And can I say that I'm so totally in love with your Dexter/Light ? The dark humour of the story is a real delight.I hope you'll update sooner than in 2 months...*wink* Aida
schedule September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is fantastic.
The atmosphere is wonderful. It's such fun - you've really captured that 1950's black and white feel, all she can see in her mind's eye is Light sitting at his enormous desk while a gorgeous woman, presumably wearing red swoons about.

She loves it. Can't wait for an update.
person Mai Xi
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do like this. Especially Ryuk, huhu. I hope you'll continue it.
person Dotowe
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dooooumi!

I just about jumped out of my seat here at work when I saw that you updated Arcadia. AND YOU ADDED THE TEA SCENE!!!! Me love you long time. Gawd, its funny huh?

Hmmm, I almsot wonder if Near and Mello are undercover for L. Wouldn't that be cool? Loved it, loved it, loved it.

And the little snippet about having influence on world governemnts being godly was fantastic.

I appreciated the little bit about Ryuk being honest and simple despite his size, and the earnestness with which he tries to warn Light about Mello and her seeming connection to organized crime. Lovely.

Itching for more, as always!

Joie and coffee,
Gloria
person Kaiyuke
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HRRRRRMM... this story is actually a bit more complicated than I had originally thought it was going to be. D:
All this mafia organisation links and LOL, PROSTITUTE NEAR *headdesk*
Sorry, I had to snicker at that. :D Clearly, his hair twirling was going to get him into this kind of stuff sooner or later. XD
You are hilarious girl. :)

person o_Okimi
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please, write more. I am totaly in love with this Raito. (please, with a cherry on top?)


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person Lila
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm diferent from TYA but still rally awesome...I don't usually like the first person POV but you pull it off nicely... Mello crossdressing honestly not to far of a stretch he was already always mistaken for a chick anyway might as well do the transgender thing to make life simpler...glad to see his attitude didn't change even after the change...Haha Ryuk as a human sounds like he looks the same and has the same attitude "views life as a situational comedy" Is exactly how shinigami Ryuk views Humans life... I Actually can't wait to see how L is characterized in this peice cause i find him perfect in all his imperfections and intelligence :)...This story has potential can't wait to see where this goes so... i patiently await future updates XD.
person greybird
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeah its awsome but what did i expect... its you and u roxors my boxors
person Kaiyuke
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, ok, let's be realistic here... "the voice of Light" is a tad OOC. I had difficulty guessing that it was Light (although I suppose when you narrow down the characters, who else could it be?)
Hrm, I like the idea of the story alot.
Ryuk as a human? Hee hee. :3
Anyhow, look forward to more chapters!

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