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Good oneshot. I love Naoe's angst and the drama between him and Takaya/kagetora. Please keep up the good work.

oh! i've seen similiar fics that describes naoe comparing his addictions on nicotine and his obssession to kagetora. (naoe with a cig between his lips makes him look hawt!) ahem, as i was saying, why don't you write the next chapter as takaya comparing his way of coping the older man? i don't know.... his side hobby of speeding his motorbike? takaya did mention he prefer to be betrayed rather than be abandoned. the teen is afraid of being abandoned (by naoe) and is very insecure at times. this is due to his family background. his mom abandoned them after constant abused from the husband. his father's rage and alcoholic. maybe next chapter you write takaya and beer? the pros and cons with beer and naoe.... hm...