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Oh god. PLEASE tell me you'll read this. I need you to keep on writing. please tell me you have another account and continued to write. You are just so good.... it's the first time i read fanfics so authentic.
Tell me you'll keep on, i'll even draw for you if you like T___T
We think so alike, i really like you!

your story is listed twice just so you know

This was really sexy and I loved it. I think Kaname is getting in a little over his head if he actually called Zero his. I can't wait to see where this is going. Please update soon.

good one

I love it! Keep it up. =)

Wow!!! that's all I can say. Oh and it's a good wow lol ; ) You're very creative please write more on this

i must say this is very good .o) even the M/M is sexy in this fic and i dont like read M/M .o)
please continue

Ooo! I have an idea! Why don't you have Kaname cut Yuki's neck lightly and that draws him in to join in on the fun. Lots of reluctance and second guessing, but Kaname is controlling him with the bloodlust? Lots of coaxing. I doubt, though that Yuuki would need a lot. She practically does anything Kaname tells her to. This was a great story. Kepp writing please!

The story so far is pretty decent as far as writing goes. Originality is a bit eh, but that's to be expected with using characters of another artist or author. I must commend the author however, for putting in some ideas that I myself had wanted to see from the beginning. The creative use of blood lust bringing on about a sexual lust, though a common idea, is normally described in most narrations I've read, but rather hinted at, or vice versa, the sexual lust brings on the blood lust. I'm enjoying the short story so far, but a bit of constructive criticism, some of the sentence structure is repetitive, but by no means detracts from the over all feel of the plot. Kudos to the author for being the first fan fic author in a while to keep my attention for more than a chapter. I look forward to the next one.

I'm thinkin... Zero should Join in... >:D
Very good story and very well written. Keep it up! and I'm looking forward to the next chapter up soon?