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by sharpeslass

person Nuwanda
schedule December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE this fic. The two are perfectly in character, its funny and sexy, and the ending is PERFECT. Just love it.^^
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite 58 fics out there. It's very believable. Good job.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Erotic, very erotic. I really liked how you dealt with the dialogue because it sounded like them - both of them and I was super grateful for that. I thought they were IC and I thought it was HOT lol and well - I just liked it very much. Thank you for the read and I'd love to see more from you.

thanks
hina xXxx
person yellow22
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good, very hot!
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I just loved it. In character, and they were just adorable together. Thanks for the hot and cute read.
person orvida
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know that i reviewed over at lj but i just love this story so erotic and intense.

And i still love the ending with goyjo switching from the un named red head to himself in the end.

And i can hardly wait for the next chapter to go up and i don't think that your a dork you write to beautifuly to be a dork.

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